Someday I Hope

DeadlySilence
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Someday I Hope Apr 12, 2004 0:05:46 GMT -5

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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 0:05:46 GMT -5

Someday I hope to look in the mirror
And see someone worth seeing.
I would like to see someone smiling
And someone standing next to me smiling.

Someday I hope to see you
Standing here next to me.
I hope you'll be happy
And still love me on that day.

Someday I hope to know you love me
Without a doubt in my mind
And know that I can
Always call you mine.

Someday I hope to wrap my arms
And maybe even wrap me, around you.
I'll keep you safe
And never let anyone tear us apart.

Someday I hope to show you
All the love I have for you
And all the love you deserve.
I love you!

4-11-2004

T.J. Barber
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Someday I Hope Apr 12, 2004 12:14:06 GMT -5

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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 12, 2004 12:14:06 GMT -5

Very Good Job Cj, This was truly unusual for you. I loved it. It has been quite sometime since I have seen you write a poem about love. I think it might have been back at the very fist Poet Club. Well, very good anyway, Great Job!, Tj

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DeadlySilence Guest	Someday I Hope Apr 12, 2004 12:53:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 12:53:50 GMT -5 smiles yes, TJ, when you "knew" me before I didn't normally write love poems. now once in a while they squeak out. Anyways, so glad you liked it. Thank you.

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Someday I Hope Apr 12, 2004 18:59:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 12, 2004 18:59:55 GMT -5 Yeah CJ, he's right, this is a great write, you write good love poems.
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DeadlySilence Guest	Someday I Hope Apr 12, 2004 23:29:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 23:29:46 GMT -5 Thanks, dear.

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Someday I Hope Apr 17, 2004 15:55:01 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:55:01 GMT -5

beautiful piece

Someday I hope to look in the mirror
And see someone worth seeing.
I would like to see someone smiling
And someone standing next to me smiling

this stanza, the first, was wonderful...it reminded me of the movie Mulan...disney movie

also it reminded me of a quote that i can't remember anymore, got distracted....
this was a wonderful piece..great job!

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DeadlySilence Guest	Someday I Hope Apr 17, 2004 19:23:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 17, 2004 19:23:51 GMT -5 I've never seen that movie, but thanks!

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 0:05:46 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 12, 2004 12:14:06 GMT -5

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 12:53:50 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 12, 2004 18:59:55 GMT -5

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 12, 2004 23:29:46 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:55:01 GMT -5

Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 17, 2004 19:23:51 GMT -5