The Thought of Goodbye

[Brady Kyler]

They tell me you could die
That makes me want to cry
Because without you in my life
I would be so very dry

The thought of goodbye
Kills me inside
Losing you forever
Would be like damnation

If I could heal your body
I'd do it in a heartbeat
But I can only love you
With my whole heart and soul

Please don't leave me love
Even the brightest angel above
Couldn't compare to our life down here
Nothing can even come near

You must be very strong
We've got to carry on
And together we'll wage a war
On your illness forever more

Now gently take my hand
And we'll firmly take a stand
Letting our love shine light
On the darkness in sight

The thought of goodbye
Without you I would die
So fight to stay alive
So we can share our lives

[bloodredtears]

wonderful piece you have here Kane...i loved the rhythm to it...great job!

[T.J. Barber]

I to enjoyed the rythym. It contained a bablance. Every word coincided with one another in a harmonic balance. Great job Kane,

Tj

[Brady Kyler]

Thank you both much, your comments do not go unappreciated.

[NeverMore]

This poem touched a nerve I will tell you.. It made me sit and read a few times.. you have a real gift with rhyme, something I do not posess.. This is terrifying and beautiful..

[Brady Kyler]

Thanks Nevermore, as I said earlier, I appreciate your kind words