Windy Seas and Calm Beaches

[Eclipse]

Windy seas and Calm Beaches

Crystal clear liquid perfection; oh the pounding waves!
Crashing against the craggy shores of this icy heart.
Your waters are warm, and I am consumed.
Slam on the rocks, to pull and tear me apart.

You’re smiling; like diamonds on the pounding waves.
Glittering and shining light into the dark of this place.
Washing and rolling over me, bathing my body in hope.
A vigorous shake and a rough throw, to bring us face to face.

You know how to break me, like the relentless pounding waves.
Maybe just a little force, borrowed from the trident in his hand.
Change me from the hurricane and the whipping winds.
To the fingers, writing I love you’s in the sand.

[imaginary goddess #5]

all your poems are wonderful, and, as i expected, I found this one ethereal and lovely. your extended metaphor fits perfectly. i absolutely loved the last line (To the fingers, writing I love you’s in the sand.) and this one (You’re smiling; like diamonds on the pounding waves.) because they touched me somehow

exquisite
-- Lia --

[bloodredtears]

that was amazingly beautiful...the imagery of the waves crashing on rocks, the idea you tied it to of your heart and his love like warm water against it....beautifully written...

[Eclipse]

thank you both. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^.^

[The Bathroom Poet]

I likes, good imagery and description.

- The Bathroom Poet