Re written Suspended Lavender fragrance.

[Mikepoet]

One needs suspended
Lavender fragrance
to caress a soul
in a bubble bath.

As bathing passion
awakens romance
intricate rhythms
entwine fingertips.

When tub overflows
a bubble nudged by sigh
floats as a transient sphere
which mirrors bathing beauty.

It lands on a plate
named Sweets for the sweet.
I hand you a slice of
Orange scented chocolate.

Relax my love,
and be a bathing beauty.
I shall tend your needs

[bloodredtears]

oooh...i really love how you changed it, the ending i mean, great job!

[Mikepoet]

Thank you!! A problem with me is that I hardly ever feel a writing is finished.
It's a lonely world to write this and live it in my mind and be too reclusive to comprehend how to make it happen. :'(I'm sad today.

[imaginary goddess #5]

Mmm, the ORANGE FLAVORED CHOCOLATE! Omg, I love 'em. I liked this part the best for some reason unknown to me:

floats as a transient sphere
which mirrors bathing beauty.

-- Lianna --

[Mikepoet]

I watched it in my mind, the tub git too full because I was watching her bath and a bubble ran over the edge as she a baby Dolphin sigh type thing, the bubble escaped and floated out across the room and mirrored her. God I enjoyed writing this one.