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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 24, 2004 20:10:41 GMT -5
Delicious are the moments
Of romance that’s as sweet
as eating chocolate pie
with love I’ll someday meet.
As fiction she’s as flawless,
as fabled love does greet.
Life’s soul mate comes a calling,
lonely daydreams need relief.
Her tears cleanse what all is healing
pictured hue of falling rain.
medicates soothes the feelings
but can’t wash away the stain.
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 25, 2004 4:21:41 GMT -5
good piece..do you have another poem with this same title in Misc???/....i really liked this one alot! great job!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 25, 2004 11:48:06 GMT -5
Thank you..I will check and if so I will try to figure out how to delete it...Thanks for letting me know...your cool...One day I will find my lady who will sit and watch romance movies while eating chocolate pie with me..
Something about that combination that I like alot..
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
Posts: 330
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Post by amberputis on Mar 25, 2004 23:20:01 GMT -5
I enjoyed this one immensly! what another great write of yours...you have such talent!
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 26, 2004 1:43:55 GMT -5
That makes me feel good.. ;Dthank you so much..
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Mar 27, 2004 10:01:30 GMT -5
a flawless flow of rhyme. awesome write. =)
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Post by Mikepoet on Mar 27, 2004 13:32:18 GMT -5
;DGlad you liked..
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 1, 2004 14:34:23 GMT -5
Another great write from Mike, nice!
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Post by Mikepoet on Apr 1, 2004 15:14:36 GMT -5
Thank you!!! ;D
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