In my Dreams

Burning Innocence
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In my Dreams Mar 19, 2004 19:57:20 GMT -5

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Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 19, 2004 19:57:20 GMT -5

I have cried many tears
You taste so good
I have screamed out in the night
You feel the heat
I have tried to push you away
You make me want you more each day

Staring into deep blue seas
I'm lost under your turbulent trance
Caught underneath the spotlight
You pull so delicately
The grab, the pull against my will
I push, I fall, I'm in your arms

Soft, the touch of your nails
Scraping lightly against my back
The fight, the cries against my soul
Wishing I could run away
To hide my mistakes
To bury into my void

Filling, the hole within
Sweat drips, you lick
Bites, the marks you leave on my arms
I claw, leaving my name for all to see
Shatter me to pieces
Break my foundation
Tear away at my heart

Feed me your soul
To make me whole
Let this dream never end
When I awake, I hope to remain
Lost in your trance
Our bodies moving against the wave
To the point where we are one

Last Edit: May 8, 2004 10:41:38 GMT -5 by Burning Innocence

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amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	In my Dreams Mar 19, 2004 21:18:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Mar 19, 2004 21:18:56 GMT -5 this was well written, i enjoyed it..
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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	In my Dreams Mar 20, 2004 3:46:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Mar 20, 2004 3:46:20 GMT -5 very interesting piece..you have some great imagery here..wonderful job...
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

imaginary goddess #5 Novice shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality. Posts: 69	In my Dreams Apr 4, 2004 0:41:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Apr 4, 2004 0:41:39 GMT -5 very well written. loved ur imagery and descriptions. great job. -- Lianna --
	- Lianna Last one left of our lineage - don't forget us. imaginary goddesses. "shallowed up in the sound of my screaming cannot cease for the fear of silent nights oh how i long for the deep sleep dreaming the goddess of imaginary light..." - Evanescence

Post by Burning Innocence on Mar 19, 2004 19:57:20 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Mar 19, 2004 21:18:56 GMT -5

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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Apr 4, 2004 0:41:39 GMT -5