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Post by John Barnett on Mar 18, 2004 13:49:20 GMT -5
Angel, how I love you so Girl, how I long to know What truly lies within your heart Is there a fire burning, even a spark? A flame of desire just for me Is it possible, can this be? You say you love me and I believe Still your actions can so often deceive So what's the truth, who are you? I want to see you in plain, clear view If you love me, let me feel it If it's really there, then don't conceal it If your heart hurts, let me heal it 'Cause I know the pain and it's hard to deal with But that's why I am here, to help you endure To love you my dear, to love you pure If you'll open your heart and your eyes You'll feel and see what truly lies Within this man who loves you A heart full of passion, all for you
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 18, 2004 22:52:27 GMT -5
i love that part...wonderful write john!
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 19, 2004 21:21:13 GMT -5
this was great, i love to see the sensitive side of a man because it almost seems as a rarity now-a-days. beautiful write!
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Post by John Barnett on Mar 30, 2004 21:08:01 GMT -5
Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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imaginary goddess #5
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shape me into something I never will be, and you'll find out this facade was an escape from reality.
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Post by imaginary goddess #5 on Apr 4, 2004 21:44:19 GMT -5
very sweet and heartfelt! lovely piece you have here.
i particularly loved these lines: If you love me, let me feel it If it's really there, then don't conceal it If your heart hurts, let me heal it 'Cause I know the pain and it's hard to deal with
-- Lia --
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