Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Mar 16, 2004 15:25:00 GMT -5
Fairy Tale Land
Save me from this castle that I have barricaded myself into. I do not wish to be alone this time, I wish to be with you. Free me from the prison where I helped turn the key. And part of me screams, “No! Just save yourself from me!”
Let pixie dust work magic and give your stead his wings. Beware the cliffs and the lake and the songs the siren sings. Fly away from the churning sky; careful through the storm ahead. Come to me now, to this tower and heed the words I’ve said.
Take me far away from here, and lead me by the hand. Let’s fly away on your horse, away from Fairy Tale Land.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 17, 2004 21:11:16 GMT -5
A little mythical, nice twist, i tend to see that often from writers here, but anyways...well done and keep it up!
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Mar 18, 2004 17:09:49 GMT -5
yeah i wrote this for an image challenge on another poetry site. The picture had like flying horses and a castle...so yeah this is what came out. thanks for the review.
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