Her Love

[Celestial]

This is my attempt at the thoughts of love from a male's point of view. I've been told I've done it well, but I'm not too sure. Enjoy.


Does she hear me?
Is she even listeing?
Of course she is...
Always there for me...
How can she be so kind to me...
With how I treat her?


I'll never understand it...
I don't want her to leave...
This feeling is new to me...
I want it to stay...
I want her to stay...


She's shown a new light on the world
Just for me to see...
I see clearly now
The whole picture, not just the framed section


Love...
Is that what this is?
I hope so...
It feels so nice...
Love...
Who would have thought?

~ Her Love ~
By CAB 2004

[SilverEyes]

"The whole picture, not just the framed section"

I like how you expressed love as the opening of the world and indirectly that feeling of being on top of the world.

[sweetest17sin]

well, althoughi cant really say whether it is how a male thinks since i am not one, lol, from watching many of my guy friends these thoughts seem as if they would be goin through their heads. nice job!

[bloodredtears]

this is a good poem, but since i'm not a guy either i can't say whether its right or wrong, but it's probably pretty close! great job!