Eternal Love

Celestial
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Eternal Love Feb 28, 2004 16:26:47 GMT -5

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Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:26:47 GMT -5

Eternal
That is what we call it
Our love for each other

It's unconditional
Always and forever
I'm your's and you're mine
Forever bond by fate

You're the only one for me
And I'll wait in death for you
No matter how long it takes
I'll be with you forever

No one can bring us apart
Not with the special love we share
Forever yours
My love
My only true love
I love you...

~ Eternal Love ~
~By CAB 2004

Yeah, it's a bomb.
Yes, it's lit.
Yes, you better run for your life.
:: insert evil laughter here ::

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Eternal Love Feb 28, 2004 18:21:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 18:21:03 GMT -5 The last stanza is my favorite. Ah, young love, if only I know thee.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Eternal Love Feb 28, 2004 21:30:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:30:44 GMT -5 that was really sweet. nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Eternal Love Feb 29, 2004 13:44:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:44:24 GMT -5 another beautiful piece...the opening stanza was my favorite part, which i think is great, because it really draws the reader in....great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Eternal Love Mar 1, 2004 5:46:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 5:46:58 GMT -5 Celestial, I like your poem and also like the intro stanza the best. ;DJoe

Celestial Novice Celestial.Photographer.Poet. Posts: 72	Eternal Love Mar 2, 2004 19:01:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Celestial on Mar 2, 2004 19:01:21 GMT -5 Thanks for your comments, guys. I really am glad you enjoy these.
	Yeah, it's a bomb. Yes, it's lit. Yes, you better run for your life. :: insert evil laughter here ::

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:26:47 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 18:21:03 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:30:44 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:44:24 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 5:46:58 GMT -5

Post by Celestial on Mar 2, 2004 19:01:21 GMT -5