Thoughts of a Lover

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Thoughts of a Lover Feb 28, 2004 16:25:33 GMT -5

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Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:25:33 GMT -5

Originally I found a picture of a male looking out of a subway rail car looking thoughtful and this poem erupted from me.

It's what I want to know...
Where am I going?
This railway of life;
where is it taking me?
To a life of better choices,
One of better living or of worse?

How will I ever know
If you truely love me
Or if it is all just an act...

The others joke around
They say we'll be together
Forever until the end...
I wonder... Are they right?

Tell me, do you love me?
Or am I just another notch in your bed post?
Do I count; do I matter?
Please... Let me know you love me...
Because I love you...

~Thoughts of a Lover
~By CAB 2004

Yeah, it's a bomb.
Yes, it's lit.
Yes, you better run for your life.
:: insert evil laughter here ::

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Thoughts of a Lover Feb 28, 2004 17:31:33 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 17:31:33 GMT -5 How will I ever know If you truely love me Or if it is all just an act... This stanza I can relate to the most. Nice illustration of unsure love.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Thoughts of a Lover Feb 28, 2004 21:26:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:26:20 GMT -5 nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Thoughts of a Lover Feb 29, 2004 13:40:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:40:15 GMT -5 very wonderful piece...these are my fav lines: Do I count; do I matter? Please... Let me know you love me... especially the first line...i always think that...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	Thoughts of a Lover Mar 15, 2004 5:47:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Mar 15, 2004 5:47:06 GMT -5 Hm, a wonderful poem of uncertainty... When it comes to love, questions arise and so does worrying. A terrific write, I am happy to have read. Tell me, do you love me? Or am I just another notch on your bed post?
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

Celestial Novice Celestial.Photographer.Poet. Posts: 72	Thoughts of a Lover Apr 3, 2004 11:47:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Celestial on Apr 3, 2004 11:47:21 GMT -5 Thanks for the comments; I'm really glad you guys enjoyed reading it.
	Yeah, it's a bomb. Yes, it's lit. Yes, you better run for your life. :: insert evil laughter here ::

Thoughts of a Lover

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:25:33 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 17:31:33 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 28, 2004 21:26:20 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:40:15 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Mar 15, 2004 5:47:06 GMT -5

Post by Celestial on Apr 3, 2004 11:47:21 GMT -5