Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Mar 15, 2004 5:56:39 GMT -5
Mouth shut; eyes closed Hair in disarray, Everything is quiet While in bed we lay.
The night is beautiful Yet, you're all I need tonight, As you sleep I watch and sigh, Your head on my chest And in my arms you lie.
A perfect night, a perfect sky Yet all I see is you, You made a promise and I will too, From now until forever I shall always love you.
And 'till the day I die My soul will be with yours, And no matter rain or shine I'll always love you more.
While in bed we lay You whisper in that tone, Your love will always be there, And because of you I know That I'll never be alone.
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 15, 2004 16:11:33 GMT -5
very beautiful romantic piece Seth...i really loved the last stanza...great job!
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Mar 17, 2004 21:09:34 GMT -5
Aww, how I love such sweet poems..great job here!
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:30:09 GMT -5
Very sweet, I loved the sweetness of this poem
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 2, 2004 17:19:39 GMT -5
sugary sweet. loved it. ^.^
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