dear god

[sweetest17sin]

Dear God
Why’d you do it?
Why are you putting me through all this pain?
Why’d you send me my angel,
If you knew you were going to take him away?
Dear God
What now?
What am I supposed to do?
I don’t know if I have it in me,
I don’t think I have the strength to pull through.
Dear God
What’s going to happen.
Will I find another guy?
Or is this love,
going to cause me to die?
Dear God
What about him?
Is he going to find another girl?
Or will he finally realize
That I am his world?
Dear God
Why is life like this?
Why is it so unfair?
Why are you happy one minute?
And the next, only sadness is there?
Dear God
I’m so lost.
I feel so empty inside.
I can’t sleep,
All I can do is cry.
Dear God
Promise me we just need break,
Some time to think things through.
I know that I need him,
And he knows he needs me too.
Dear God
I pray to you
That you won’t allow this love to end.
Please bring our breaking hearts back together,
So we can help each other’s hearts to mend.

[bloodredtears]

another good poem..i really enjoyed it!

[Chaotic_Thetis]

Now this one i thouroughly enjoyed, each repition of "Dear God" added greatly to the poem, making it feel like a prayer and plea in such a poetic sense. Lovely job ^_^

[SilverEyes]

sweetest17sin said:

Dear God
I pray to you
That you won’t allow this love to end.
Please bring our breaking hearts back together,
So we can help each other’s hearts to mend.

Another great piece and I can especially relate to these last few lines.

[amberputis]

hmm, it was good...

[sweetest17sin]

thanks all