Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 26, 2004 0:38:19 GMT -5
Summer's Sun ...for April
Let us walk the shores of life
together,
laughing in the sun,
strolling through forests,
playing on the shore, and lying, side by side,
in meadows beneath majestic mountains...
Let us share life,
laughter, and;
love--
in secret worlds none but we shall ever know...
You bring merriment, peace,
and joy into my life,
and I come to you bearing
new worlds, understanding,
and the strength to make your dreams reality...
Let us go together,
to our own special dawn,
to awake in the morning
of a brighter, new world
where dreams are no longer dreams
where our children
laugh and play in summer's sun... © T. GhostWolf Davidson, May 22, 1975
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 26, 2004 7:44:26 GMT -5
This is a good write,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 26, 2004 11:12:13 GMT -5
another beautiful piece...i really liked this one alot...great job!
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 26, 2004 14:56:38 GMT -5
Wolf, this one was great. It was truly inspirational. Good job!
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Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Posts: 124
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Post by Wolf on Feb 26, 2004 15:25:27 GMT -5
Joe, Kristine, TJ; thank you All of my poetry is written spontaneously, for what it's worth; I've never been able to sit down, figure out a topic, and then write about it - it just, well, happens (wry grin). The only exception was an assignment in my poetry class in college, where the professor divided the class into groups of five, then gave us a single line on which to base a poem - and 20 minutes to do it! Other than that - I write when strong emotions cross a threshold, and then it is pure stream of consciousness writing; no editing, reworking - just - writing. Thanks again Wolf
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:18:06 GMT -5
nice job. i thought i had already replied to this, but apparently i didnt. lol. neways, great piece.
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 1:21:24 GMT -5
Such a beautiful message and wonderfully expressed as well. Nice write.
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