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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 14:19:42 GMT -5
a wonderful piece...another great one!
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Post by kronicdaze on Feb 24, 2004 18:10:35 GMT -5
Thanx bloodredtears...I'm glad you like all my work...your comments are encouraging...so thanx again...lata
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Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 18:30:04 GMT -5
I like this poem, however your slang and typos, make
the reading hard and a little rough edged for the readers. If you correct the grammer it would flow much better,I think you are a good writer, if you ever wish to summit your poetry for any contest or to publish, then you need to show you are sincere about your work.Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe
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