Desire

DeadByMorning
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shattered in lies, looking up to the crimson sky...above all is peaceful

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Desire Mar 10, 2004 19:36:17 GMT -5

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Post by DeadByMorning on Mar 10, 2004 19:36:17 GMT -5

I want your touch on my skin
Soft and gentle
Your fingertips caressing me
The rain enveloping us both
The light shining from your face
is the only one I want to see

Lift me up into
the clouds and
make me laugh
make me smile
make me feel
alive

Kiss me soft tonight
Love me under the clouds
Caress me softly with your kisses
Show me what your passion means
Unlock my heart
Let it fly to you
Then let me unlock yours
And capture it for all time

Love me
Touch me softly
Hold me in ecstasy forever
make me shiver
Make me scream

I taste death within
Save me from the last
Sunset and kiss me
make me feel alive
Can't you see I need you
to get me off this death high?

~J

I wish I knew why I can't feel the words that slice so deeply into my wounded flesh.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Desire Mar 11, 2004 22:51:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 11, 2004 22:51:48 GMT -5 nice job. different style than im used to, but i enjoyed it.
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Desire Mar 14, 2004 8:56:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Mar 14, 2004 8:56:35 GMT -5 huh, interesting, but pretty good!
	Amber

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Desire Mar 14, 2004 10:21:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 14, 2004 10:21:43 GMT -5 I loved it! It had real heart and true passion. The way you worded things was just incredible. Your a very talented poet.
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Desire Mar 14, 2004 19:04:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Mar 14, 2004 19:04:11 GMT -5 i really enjoyed this one. I absolutly loved this stanza Love me Touch me softly Hold me in ecstasy forever make me shiver Make me scream awesome. nice twist with death at the end.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

NeverMore Virtuoso Beethoven Looking f*g Posts: 454	Desire May 16, 2004 21:13:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by NeverMore on May 16, 2004 21:13:48 GMT -5 I found I liked this a great deal S Reading it reminds me of one of my friends from my boards. Not even sure what it is that made me feel that though. Keep writing, you have an awsome talent

Post by DeadByMorning on Mar 10, 2004 19:36:17 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 11, 2004 22:51:48 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Mar 14, 2004 8:56:35 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 14, 2004 10:21:43 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Mar 14, 2004 19:04:11 GMT -5

Post by NeverMore on May 16, 2004 21:13:48 GMT -5