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STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Mar 7, 2004 6:25:13 GMT -5

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Post by Dreamcatcher on Mar 7, 2004 6:25:13 GMT -5

Strawberry kisses and strawberry wine,
linger forever in my heart and mind.
Remembering the sweetness of your lips
in the summer of life, youths eclipse.

May meadows in ardor transported,
by riparian woodlands, love courted.
Stars in the sky and stars in our eyes,
secured in memory as time flies.

Cupid, personified love on the wing,
with arrows of awakening did bring,
First loves enamored innocence,
exploring the soul for recompense.

I still envision the misty yesterdays,
Strawberry kisses, strawberry wine daze.
Forever secreted away in my mind,
eternally locked away in time.

"Of all the words of tongue or pen, the saddest of these, it might have been"
John Greenleaf Whittier

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Mar 7, 2004 12:17:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:17:16 GMT -5 i loved this...you captured a rather beautiful memory! wonderful job!!!!!!!!!!!
	Amber

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Mar 10, 2004 16:15:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Mar 10, 2004 16:15:14 GMT -5 Very nice, I love strawberries, great job!
	Jwalaeb

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Mar 10, 2004 18:58:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Mar 10, 2004 18:58:28 GMT -5 i liked the rhyme in this. very awesome. ::scampers off to find something strawberry::...
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Mar 14, 2004 10:24:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 14, 2004 10:24:12 GMT -5 Good rhyme capabilities. Your an awesome poet. Although all poetry doesn't have to rhyme. This piece brought it out nicely. I enjoyed the message by the way..Good Job!
	Last Edit: Mar 14, 2004 10:24:48 GMT -5 by T.J. Barber No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE Apr 1, 2004 20:29:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:29:37 GMT -5 That's true Tj, poetry doesn't always have to rhyme, and neither do songs, some people forget that. But this is a great poem, very well constructed, I like.
	~~KelZ~~ Z e p h y r Poet Club Administrative Assistant

STRAWBERRY KISSES~STRAWBERRY WINE

Post by Dreamcatcher on Mar 7, 2004 6:25:13 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Mar 7, 2004 12:17:16 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Mar 10, 2004 16:15:14 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Mar 10, 2004 18:58:28 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 14, 2004 10:24:12 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 20:29:37 GMT -5