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Post by moondust on Feb 11, 2004 16:43:38 GMT -5
Valentines Day Is Near :Moondust:
I’m not expecting a dozen red and white roses Or even a candle light dinner with red wine Or you and me cuddling by the fire late and night Holding each other tight Kissing each other gently on the lips I’m not expecting An over stuffed teddy bear with lace Or you and me dancing with grace I’m not even expecting you to admire the stars with me Or even share that brilliant round blue gray moon That I’m hoping to share with you soon I’m not expecting anything on Valentines Day I’m not even hoping or even asking for much I’m afraid I won’t even get a kiss O how I miss those lips I’m not expecting a card Full of hearts roses verse and rhyme No not this time I’m not asking for much or expecting anything Every time I do even get my hopes up for a valentine I get ignored each and every time I’m not asking much Just for you to pick up the phone and maybe say hi That would make heart come alive To hear your voice wish me A Happy Valentines Day That isn’t asking for much. February 10\2004
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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 11, 2004 18:14:11 GMT -5
I enjoyed this piece. It's refreshing. Great Job, Keep it up!!!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 11, 2004 18:37:24 GMT -5
It looks like we're in the same boat. Nice write.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 11, 2004 19:32:20 GMT -5
this is a very good poem...it really sux when you're along on v-day...i know how that goes all too well... but anyway..great job i hope things start looking up for you!
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Chaotic_Thetis
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Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 11, 2004 20:25:09 GMT -5
Indeed, that was rather touching and serene in a way, nicely written ^_^
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 11, 2004 20:31:18 GMT -5
aww...so bittersweet. sounds like I'm there too. It's wonderful piece. And I hope you have a nice Valentine's Day too. ^.^
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:40:53 GMT -5
nice job
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amberputis
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~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 17:30:36 GMT -5
I liked the use of words, and most everything about it except that i couldn't keep on track, some words would rhyme, some wouldn't...i dont know maybe i didn't read it with complete focus, lol, maybe you should just ignore my comments heh...good job though
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