this boy is you

sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!

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this boy is you Feb 12, 2004 1:15:36 GMT -5

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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:15:36 GMT -5

There's a boy I love with all of my heart
He's a thief, for he's stolen it from me
I am hoping that never shall we part
For together is where we're meant to be

As beautiful as he appears to be
He is just as beautiful within
He loves me, and cares for, and respects me
There is no other as perfect as him

We have definitely had our rough times
And I'm sure the future will bring us more
But really it's for the best, because I'm
Sure they make our love stronger than before

Without this boy, I'll know not what to do
And my dear, this boy that I love is you

somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	this boy is you Feb 12, 2004 2:33:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:33:11 GMT -5 another really good piece...you have a lot of talent...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	this boy is you Feb 12, 2004 23:45:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:45:28 GMT -5 I am amazed with the consistency of quality and talent that I've seen in your last poems. This one is another good one.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	this boy is you Feb 13, 2004 0:22:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 13, 2004 0:22:48 GMT -5 I am sorry that I do not know this already but, may I ask your name? This was an awesome, heartfelt peice. Great job!
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	this boy is you Feb 15, 2004 20:42:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:42:53 GMT -5 thanks you guys...my name is melissa...
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	this boy is you Feb 19, 2004 7:12:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:12:43 GMT -5 Yes talent here alright, you are very poetic, I like your style. regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	this boy is you Feb 19, 2004 15:57:41 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 19, 2004 15:57:41 GMT -5 It's nice, it doen't altogether stand out but the beauty of some poems that depict the intimacy of one persons love for another usually never really does stand out. Nicely written.
	A woman who choses the writing profession often does so as to give herself a rank within a male-dominated society

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	this boy is you Feb 19, 2004 20:41:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 19, 2004 20:41:31 GMT -5 a very pretty poem. ;D
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	this boy is you Feb 23, 2004 2:45:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 2:45:07 GMT -5 Melissa, I like your poem,it is beautiful! ;DJoe

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:15:36 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:33:11 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:45:28 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 13, 2004 0:22:48 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:42:53 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 19, 2004 7:12:43 GMT -5

Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 19, 2004 15:57:41 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 19, 2004 20:41:31 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 23, 2004 2:45:07 GMT -5