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Tania
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Ashes to Ashes Feb 8, 2004 1:24:32 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:24:32 GMT -5

Love is lost, love is dust
Hope turned sour, is love to lust
How green was my desert so golden
brown
Ashes to ashes, my soul is bound
Walk in the moonshine
Love me in your way
Death is like a flower rotten
A memory blocked out
Forgotten
Dust and desire have covered the view
Love green and rotten spoil you
I did not see you in the ending day
Love gone rotten showed me the way
So I stand in the crossroads of life
Love is lust disfigured by strife
Tania

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T. C. Walsh

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Ashes to Ashes Feb 8, 2004 1:38:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 1:38:34 GMT -5 It seemed disconnected but it works well together. Another wonderful write, Tania.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Ashes to Ashes Feb 8, 2004 14:19:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 8, 2004 14:19:09 GMT -5 I liked this too very intresting richie
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Ashes to Ashes Feb 8, 2004 16:46:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 8, 2004 16:46:42 GMT -5 i really like it...especially the first two lines! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	Ashes to Ashes Feb 9, 2004 14:11:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 9, 2004 14:11:38 GMT -5 Indeed, parts seemed disorientated in a way but in only added to the effect of something torn. Nicely done ^_^
	A woman who choses the writing profession often does so as to give herself a rank within a male-dominated society

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Ashes to Ashes Feb 11, 2004 13:27:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 11, 2004 13:27:08 GMT -5 I liked this one. I enjoyed reading it. It was pure, heartfelt, and extremely truthful. I have felt this way several times actually. Great job!
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Ashes to Ashes Feb 15, 2004 20:23:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:23:34 GMT -5 nice job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:24:32 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 1:38:34 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 8, 2004 14:19:09 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 8, 2004 16:46:42 GMT -5

Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 9, 2004 14:11:38 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 11, 2004 13:27:08 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:23:34 GMT -5