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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!

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meant to be Feb 12, 2004 1:12:13 GMT -5

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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:12:13 GMT -5

i swear i try not to think about you
you're no longer supposed to be on my mind
but as hard as i search for someone new
you're all my mind can find

i try to get my heart to realize
that you and i are no longer one
but all it says to me is
"if one holds on, hope is never really gone"

i don't want to hope
what i want is to know
that your heart is like mine
and never really let me go

i want to hear you tell me
that i'm still the one you need
that i'm the one you think about
that i'm the girl in your dreams

i want to be your girl again
and i want you to be my guy
i want to think of you and only smile
not think of what we had and cry

ive had time to think about it
and i know for sure it's true
that you were meant to be w/ me
and i, with you

somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

bloodredtears
Legend

I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

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meant to be Feb 12, 2004 2:40:18 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:40:18 GMT -5

another really great piece here...although it seems you're starting to repeat yourself...maybe next time you should post so many poems at the same time...there is a rule, a guideline that asks that you don't post more than three poems in a forum per day...but this is a good piece

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	meant to be Feb 12, 2004 23:31:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:31:30 GMT -5 It's like I wrote it myself.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	meant to be Feb 13, 2004 12:18:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 13, 2004 12:18:51 GMT -5 my words exactly that 'SilverEyes' stated. nice job
	Amber

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	meant to be Feb 15, 2004 20:39:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:39:11 GMT -5 whoops...missed that one, sorry. i just posted them all at once just cuz.........actually i dont really know why i did, i think cuz i was bored and couldnt sleep. sorry.
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

HeartInChains Novice if love isnt a game, then why are there so many playahz? Posts: 16	meant to be Feb 29, 2004 0:50:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by HeartInChains on Feb 29, 2004 0:50:17 GMT -5 it's a cute poem.. nice, and kinda sad at sum angle.. i like tha first stanza.. dun get me wrong or anything, i like tha poem as a whole!

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	meant to be Mar 1, 2004 19:15:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Mar 1, 2004 19:15:48 GMT -5 this is lovely melissa, your work is of the highest standed, [just wish I was your age with so much talent] regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	meant to be Mar 1, 2004 22:57:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 22:57:10 GMT -5 Melissa, A beautiful write, as a suggestion only; I would I and not i. ;DJoe

sweetest17sin
Virtuoso

don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!

Posts: 252

meant to be Mar 1, 2004 23:28:35 GMT -5

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Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 1, 2004 23:28:35 GMT -5

oh yeah, sorry.....i dont use correct puncutation when i just type up poems on the comp...its only when i have to send it in for publishing or frame it or give it to someone etc...as you can see, i dont use correct puncutation even now....i see it as its just the net, no biggie! but thanks!

melissa!

somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:12:13 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:40:18 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:31:30 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 13, 2004 12:18:51 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:39:11 GMT -5

Post by HeartInChains on Feb 29, 2004 0:50:17 GMT -5

Post by richie on Mar 1, 2004 19:15:48 GMT -5

Post by JosephScottMorris on Mar 1, 2004 22:57:10 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Mar 1, 2004 23:28:35 GMT -5