sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:07:55 GMT -5
there's something i need to tell you you see, i haven't been honest w/ you i am so sorry i promised it was something i'd never do
you see, i love you very much but there are times that i dont and i just thought i'd share this w/ you i think you need to know
i love you on monday the start of my week i wake up finding that it's you that i seek
i love you on tuesday i find i'm still in love i feel i'm so lucky to have an angel from above
wednesday rolls around and still it's nothing new in my head still creeps precious thoughts of you
it's thursday already this week went by so fast i'm startin to get the feeling that this love will forever always last
friday night i go out and try to have some fun so many guys around but i just know that you're the one
saturday afternoon when i awake from my dreams i'm sad to find out that reality isn't as it seems
by sunday i'm so full of love in my heart for you i quickly come to realize that there's nothing i'd rather do
no one i'd rather be with no one i could possibly love more god couldn't have picked a greater guy i'm glad that you is what he had in-store
so this is what i had to tell you i'm your girl, and you're my guy and the days that i don't love you are those that don't end in "y"
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:44:27 GMT -5
i really like this...especially the last stanza! great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 12, 2004 23:18:11 GMT -5
Such a sweet write and pretty too.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 13, 2004 12:25:04 GMT -5
i liked this one, especially because it sounds different from your other writes, although it still holds the same sweet meaning behind it..thats a good thing though.
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