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SilverEyes
Poet Laureate

Silver eyes crying crimson tears.

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Rose Feb 8, 2004 22:22:37 GMT -5

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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 22:22:37 GMT -5

In the spring it blossoms
Red, yellow, and white it blooms
A picture of eternal beauty
A sign of wonderful love
With strong, thorny,
Protective branches
The world is its large and beautiful garden
Spreading wide

I wrote this a while ago and here it is with a little editing.

Last Edit: Feb 8, 2004 22:23:06 GMT -5 by SilverEyes

You know I'm dying to live
Until I'm ready
I'm ready to die

~Jonny Lang~

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Rose Feb 9, 2004 15:40:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 9, 2004 15:40:06 GMT -5 this is so good, beautiful articulate, conveying love richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Rose Feb 24, 2004 20:13:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 20:13:46 GMT -5 o man, i feel so bad for not seeing this one earlier! this is a wonderful piece...i much enjoyed it..roses are my fave!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Rose Feb 24, 2004 20:36:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 20:36:43 GMT -5 Great poem, Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Rose Feb 24, 2004 21:06:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 24, 2004 21:06:51 GMT -5 Thanks, everyone. I really didn't expect much of this poem.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Rose Feb 24, 2004 21:22:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 21:22:47 GMT -5 SilverEyes, You are most welcome, and a great writer,Keep writing! ;DJoe

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Rose Feb 24, 2004 23:19:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 24, 2004 23:19:43 GMT -5 i liked it...truthfully beautiful.
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

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