A Poem

moondust
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A Poem Feb 7, 2004 12:50:55 GMT -5

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Post by moondust on Feb 7, 2004 12:50:55 GMT -5

This little poem is called A Poem because my new boyfriend read a poem from me that I got to hand to him and I never let any of my true friends or people close to me read my work because I'm afriad of being judged the wrong way. He did not judge he liked it and we both had excioted reactions to it so I wrote about it. Thanks Moondust.

A Poem

It made me feel alive
When I got to hand you a poem
That I wrote for you
I couldn’t believe it was true
No email this time
Just straight from my hand to yours
We even got to discuss it
And how it made me feel
The moment was so very real
My heart is flowing with joy
That you read my words
That you realize I’m about truth and honesty
I have nothing to hide
I want you to see the real me
Even feel my creativity
You are eventually
Is this is a dream?
No it is real indeed
A poem
From my heart to yours
From my hand to your hand
Now put that hand in mine
We can dream together
Until the end of time.
February7\2004

ShortyBabe Novice Posts: 8	A Poem Feb 7, 2004 15:24:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ShortyBabe on Feb 7, 2004 15:24:21 GMT -5 Cute poem, keep up the writing. Heather
	##~Heather~## Play hard or go home!

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	A Poem Feb 7, 2004 20:15:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 7, 2004 20:15:10 GMT -5 I almost had the same situation a while back except it wasn't done in person. Nice write.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	A Poem Feb 7, 2004 20:35:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 7, 2004 20:35:44 GMT -5 that's really great that he reacted so well...sometimes that doesn't happen and you feel real insecure about yourself and your talent! great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	A Poem Feb 8, 2004 14:20:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 8, 2004 14:20:36 GMT -5 very good keep writing richie
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	A Poem Feb 12, 2004 0:47:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:47:04 GMT -5 that was really sweet...and so relatable. its so easy to simply write an email to someone, or send a letter, but when you give them something face to face....it has such a stronger impact. good job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by moondust on Feb 7, 2004 12:50:55 GMT -5

Post by ShortyBabe on Feb 7, 2004 15:24:21 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 7, 2004 20:15:10 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 7, 2004 20:35:44 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 8, 2004 14:20:36 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:47:04 GMT -5