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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 16:13:58 GMT -5
So thrive my heart's beat Intensify my blood's heat As I touch your soft skin I can feel your warmth within You long for my touch Another caressing clutch Your hair brushes across my face And your kiss I can taste I am infused with your affection I need no cure for this infection Such an amazing power I do feel And with a kiss we do seal Yet another glorious meeting I can hear our hearts beating So strong and bold I can feel the love unfold In each beat as we breathe As your life flows into me I wish that I could pause time To keep you in these arms of mine This is the way I want to die With you here by my side In a moment like this with you Doing what I love to do
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:32:41 GMT -5
I wish that I could pause time To keep you in these arms of mine This is the way I want to die
I couldn't help but smile as I read this. Great write.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:39:59 GMT -5
another really beautiful piece here john...i especially loved these lines: i really enjoy reading your poetry!
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 19:44:49 GMT -5
Thank you, I am really glad that you enjoy it, that means a lot to me.
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Post by ShortyBabe on Feb 6, 2004 1:23:55 GMT -5
Hey John, good job. It's been a while since i've read any of your stuff... You always seem to amaze me. Great job, again.
Heather
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Eclipse
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 6, 2004 18:57:24 GMT -5
very sensual and loving. you're truely talented.
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sweetest17sin
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:49:45 GMT -5
you did a very good job of painting a beautiful picture in this poem. good job!
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