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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 16:12:08 GMT -5
You said you'd be going away I know it's only for a few days But I miss you every moment that we are apart This kind of distance does something to my heart I'm longing just to hear your voice again Please give me a call as soon as you can Because I'm going out of my mind Wishing for a simple sign To know that you're okay Even though you're far away You're still right here in my heart
I don't care how many miles away you are We are still looking at the same pretty stars Maybe you're in another state But I can still feel my heart palpitate And I know that you're with me With you, I am all I can ever be Maybe you're gone away Sitting on the beach today But I feel you surfing in my soul It's you that I long to hold
Maybe you'll call me tonight When the moon is lit and the stars are bright Maybe I'll hear your voice for a minute or two But baby I'd still rather be there with you I'm waiting for you to come home Waiting anxiously by the phone Just for you and only you There's nothing I'd rather do And I know you're still here with me Right here in my heart, where you'll always be
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:35:09 GMT -5
You never cease to amaze. This is such a beautiful piece.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:36:20 GMT -5
this piece is very beautiful john...i really enjoyed the opening lines of the second stanza: it's so true, no matter how many miles span, we're all still watching the same night sky! beautifully done!
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Post by moondust on Feb 6, 2004 11:51:23 GMT -5
Hi Blood thought I drop in read some of your work.Nice read I know what it's like to miss some one and I love that line "Were still watching the same stars" I was even in a long distance relationship before and missing someone you love sure can make you feel like your going insane. "I'm waiting by the phone I hope you call" Story of my life. I love this poem nice write beauitfully written.
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Post by richie on Feb 6, 2004 14:12:29 GMT -5
good poem, full of profound thoughts wonderful meter regards richie
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Eclipse
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 6, 2004 18:55:44 GMT -5
man this is so beautiful
Maybe you'll call me tonight When the moon is lit and the stars are bright
i loved those lines. amazing write. =)
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sweetest17sin
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:51:47 GMT -5
once again...nice job. distance definitly is not something fun...but after i think it does more good than bad. it shows just how much you really do care for someone. i think everybody needs that distance once in a while simply for that reason.
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