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Angel Girl Feb 5, 2004 14:31:26 GMT -5

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Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 14:31:26 GMT -5

A year has now passed
As I reflect upon the past
I think about the pain
But I can rejoice in the gain
We have come such a long way
Since that sad, lonely day
That I made a mistake
My world began to shake
As it crumbled to the ground
With a deadly, silent sound
Things couldn't be the same
But it wasn't the end of the game
We found one another again
And happiness was reborn within
The returned to the sky
As we spread our wings to fly
High above all the whole world
Just me and my Angel girl

Jwalaeb

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Angel Girl Feb 5, 2004 19:34:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:34:24 GMT -5 a very upbeat happy love poem! it's so great when you can capture, or recapture the love you feel for someone and be happy! great job john!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Angel Girl Feb 5, 2004 19:37:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 19:37:05 GMT -5 Yes, this girl makes me very happy and I am thankful to have her. I wrote this one for her last night, it has a special meaning behind it.
	Jwalaeb

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Angel Girl Feb 5, 2004 19:39:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:39:27 GMT -5 I love this piece. It has such a beautiful ending.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Angel Girl Feb 6, 2004 19:00:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Feb 6, 2004 19:00:29 GMT -5 The ending is magnificent. a wonderfully written piece.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Angel Girl Feb 12, 2004 0:48:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:48:02 GMT -5 awww...you're such a sweet writer! lucky girl!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Angel Girl Feb 24, 2004 17:50:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 17:50:48 GMT -5 Thank you, I appreciate your words. This poem has a very special meaning behind it.
	Jwalaeb

JosephScottMorris Apprentice Posts: 157	Angel Girl Feb 24, 2004 18:20:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JosephScottMorris on Feb 24, 2004 18:20:45 GMT -5 John, Indeed a great,Thanks for sharing it! ;DJoe

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Angel Girl Feb 25, 2004 14:06:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 25, 2004 14:06:03 GMT -5 excellent john, enjoyed reading this very intresting poem regards Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Angel Girl Feb 26, 2004 15:00:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 26, 2004 15:00:29 GMT -5 Hey, I know this girl of whom you speak. I know her well. Why??? I wonder as I sit here silently....Is it because she is my sister?
	No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:34:24 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 19:37:05 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:39:27 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Feb 6, 2004 19:00:29 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:48:02 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Feb 24, 2004 17:50:48 GMT -5

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Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 26, 2004 15:00:29 GMT -5