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serenepoetress
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~Beloved~ Feb 5, 2004 2:32:55 GMT -5

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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 5, 2004 2:32:55 GMT -5

Perfumed roses scented fragrance...
Precious gems reflective shine...
Violins beneath the moonlight...
Chilled chablis and smooth red wine...
Such endowments fend my favor...
This heart requires finer things...
The consequence of a promise...
The sanctity of gold rings...
A wellspring of strength when weary...
Safe haven when hardships fall...
A steadfast noble defender...
Besting obstacles, great and small...
True confidant and counsel...
Whenever life becomes too much...
These attributes entice me...
Confessed solely with a touch...
Pursue this heart with vigor...
Entertain no thoughts of coin...
Affections sire but one desire...
Love everlasting to adjoin...

Last Edit: Feb 5, 2004 13:31:46 GMT -5 by serenepoetress

Sathien Guest	~Beloved~ Feb 5, 2004 10:00:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Feb 5, 2004 10:00:22 GMT -5 wow. i like the rhythm of this. beautiful write. the use of adjectives and symbols were effective, just enough to avoid overkill. keep up!

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	~Beloved~ Feb 5, 2004 19:30:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:30:13 GMT -5 Another wonderful piece.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	~Beloved~ Feb 5, 2004 19:37:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:37:58 GMT -5 this is a wonderful piece...i like how you showed that material things aren't important, that all the money can never buy love...at least that's what i got out of it...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	~Beloved~ Feb 12, 2004 0:53:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:53:37 GMT -5 i agree...wonderful job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by serenepoetress on Feb 5, 2004 2:32:55 GMT -5

Post by Sathien on Feb 5, 2004 10:00:22 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 5, 2004 19:30:13 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:37:58 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:53:37 GMT -5