In Awe of Love

serenepoetress
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In Awe of Love Feb 3, 2004 18:18:00 GMT -5

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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 3, 2004 18:18:00 GMT -5

~Dedicated to my husband Edwin~

Moonlight softly peers through lace panels
Gently falling upon his masculine form.
Crickets harmonize beyond the window sill.
Brisk winds permeate these wooden walls.
Indistinct sounds echo up from the distance.
Darkness tames the countryside as he dreams.
Locks of chestnut frame his restful features.
Contentment is mine watching him sleep.
Warmth envelops me, nestled beside him.
Rhythmic pulses radiate from his chest
Mesmerizing my heart, mind and soul.
Each exquisite beat draws me nearer.
Loving him somehow completes me.
Breathlessly exhaling while he slumbers,
I cannot help but wonder—
Am I dreaming as well?

Last Edit: Feb 3, 2004 18:19:12 GMT -5 by serenepoetress

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	In Awe of Love Feb 3, 2004 18:26:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 3, 2004 18:26:57 GMT -5 Ahhhh...beautiful.
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Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	In Awe of Love Feb 7, 2004 14:43:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 7, 2004 14:43:39 GMT -5 The imagery created here was indeed beautiful, lovely write ^_^
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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	In Awe of Love Feb 7, 2004 20:33:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 7, 2004 20:33:52 GMT -5 a very lovely piece...he's lucky to have you and vice versa! great job! i like the imagery
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Sathien Guest	In Awe of Love Feb 10, 2004 10:51:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Feb 10, 2004 10:51:17 GMT -5 wow...very expressive. this poem melts. wonderful write!

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	In Awe of Love Feb 12, 2004 0:43:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 0:43:44 GMT -5 oh wow...that was really good. i think that may be one of the best poems ive ever read. awesome job!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by serenepoetress on Feb 3, 2004 18:18:00 GMT -5

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