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Post by shadowling on Jan 17, 2004 13:07:35 GMT -5
This thought’s been with me for a while It’s been praying on my mind To you I keep meaning to address it But I can’t find the courage or the time
Now I love you every second And I miss you every single day I’m scared when I look to next year When we’ll be so much farther away
I love hearing your words spoken I love being in your arms But soon I’ll go away to college Will you fallow to keep me safe from harm?
It’s not that I want to leave Trust me that’s not it at all It’s just that I want the freedom That I can gain in those new halls
I thought I could make it better Being finally parent free But now I see a different picture How far apart I’m making you and me
I’m scared that I will lose you The thought’s been ravaging my mind Can I go and still be with you Or will leaving draw to dark a line
Please tell me what your thinking I really want to know Though I’m to scared to ask the question Will you still love me if I go?
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 17, 2004 13:40:11 GMT -5
wow..that's really good! a lot of people think about that kind of stuff when they move to college! great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 18, 2004 0:37:23 GMT -5
I'm almost going through the same thing. However, it's very likely that my mother would follow me down to college. Scary thought there...
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Post by serenepoetress on Feb 3, 2004 21:18:29 GMT -5
This piece really got to me...my son is almost 1500 miles away from me and I miss him...no amount of miles or physical distance could ever sever you from your parents hearts...they will still be there for you...just an email or phone call away...beautiful piece!!!
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sweetest17sin
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:01:32 GMT -5
nice job writing this poem. i think sometimes you need to go...do what you want. sometimes letting go of something is what ends up making you stronger in the end. if its meant to be...it'll happen. if its not..it is not for a reason, and that reason may be hard to understand at the present time, but one day itll make complete sense. hang in there and follow your heart!
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