Blue Eyed Boy

[MarieVulffe]

Blue Eyed Boy


Blue-eyed boy, where’ve you been?
Missed your calls, I guess.

Hey blue-eyed boy, I’m glad you’re here;
Thought you’d left like all the rest.

Oh, blue-eyed boy, didn’t know you cared;
Thought you saw through my intentions…

Wait, blue-eyed boy, I thought you cared,
Don’t you see I’ve no intentions?

Why are you leaving, blue-eyed boy?
Aren’t I tough enough for you?

What’s the matter, blue-eyed boy?
Are your dreams not coming true?

Hold on, my blue-eyed boy,
Just give me one more moment!

Blue-eyed boy, stay one more day,
And never tell me you’ll be roaming.

Oh…never mind, blue-eyed boy,
For who am I to hold you down?

Just please leave, you blue eyed boy
And leave me with my tarnished crown.

Why don’t you leave, oh blue-eyed boy?
Why wait when the world is dying?

Blue-eyed boy, please let me be;
Can’t you see I’m crying?

The world is waiting, blue-eyed boy!
Why do you still come around?

Oh, please, my blue-eyed boy,
I have nothing left to offer you….

But hey wait, blue-eyed boy….
Could it be that you’re crying too?


(c) Marie | 2004

[bloodredtears]

very interesting piece...the repetition of blue-eyed boy is good here...i like the ending especially!

[SilverEyes]

I love the repetition and the final two verses.

[shadowling]

I ike the structure to this poem and the repition and i like the way tone changes as the poem goes on very nicely written .