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Post by Tempest on Jan 8, 2004 20:37:18 GMT -5
Fairytales
Gentle words whisper’d, Echo’d in minds longing for loving caresses. A kiss, stolen, forever savor’d, taste so sweet. Sigh, for the night is too long without the want’d presence Of a valiant knight poised atop his horse of white, Reaching into eternity, Seeking to bing what is already possess’d: her heart. As black shadows fade into light so shall I dream of you.
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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 9, 2004 16:11:41 GMT -5
that's a really good piece...i enjoyed it...very good imagery...
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Post by John Barnett on Jan 13, 2004 14:18:32 GMT -5
Yes, I agree, very well done. The imagery is very well depicted.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Jan 13, 2004 18:51:29 GMT -5
I also agree. This piece was well pieced together. You done a great job. Good Write...
Tj
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 15, 2004 18:21:04 GMT -5
Beautiful imagery and so sweet too.
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Post by shadowling on Jan 17, 2004 13:07:02 GMT -5
nice job with the imagry sweet to wel done.
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Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 14:52:51 GMT -5
perfect title for such a powerful poem. keep up!
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Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:42:29 GMT -5
very nice poem well laid out. richie.
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