You're my Sunday

[somaybeitsme]

You’re my Sunday

Your eyes
Are my eyes
You scream
You shut
Words.
Crazy fool
Give up
It’s not worth
The pain.
Call me never.
My name
Will bleed
In your fingers
If you think about it
One more time.
It’s funny
Ironic maybe
That love
Settles
Under
Angry murmurs
And silent regrets
As we try again
And again
To make it work out
Because you like
The way I feel
When you touch my skin
And I like the way you taste-
Like melted sweet chocolate
On an ice cream Sunday
And how I love Sundays
A day to feel so free
Clip my wings
Let it all go
And pretend
That none of it
Ever happen
Waste more time
With laughter
And cries
Of cold raw
Numb pain
Burning.
You were a fairy tale
In my dreams
Never real
But just a craving
A want
A foolish desire
How I could just swallow
You away
And forget all about
What it felt
Like
To be forever dead-
Buried under your skin..

[Persephone]

A different verse on love, quite interesting.

[Skye]

interesting...very

[bloodredtears]

definitely the dark side of love...and there definitely is such a thing..good portrayal of why or when love goes wrong!

[John Barnett]

Yes this is a very interesting piece, both the writing style and the angle it takes on love.

[SilverEyes]

Yep, definitely interesting and a nice piece.

[shadowling]

very interesting structure and very interesting message nicely done.