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Silent Dec 5, 2003 22:41:00 GMT -5

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Post by Persephone on Dec 5, 2003 22:41:00 GMT -5

With great difficulty I will
hold your gaze
and temper my excited
breathing.
I will cherish you from
this distance
and worship you from afar.
My little wings would
take great flight
and bring me close to your side.
With light ease I would
offer my soul,
my life,
my kiss,
my touch.
With a spring in my step
I would travel the distance.
And I am falling,
touching the clouds.
I would give you
a sacrifice worthy of
the gods
but I will never
say the words.

Skye Novice MeRrY cHrIsTmAs!!! Posts: 18	Silent Dec 7, 2003 12:51:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Skye on Dec 7, 2003 12:51:58 GMT -5 I like this alot! Great write
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bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Silent Dec 11, 2003 11:34:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Dec 11, 2003 11:34:10 GMT -5 i really enjoyed it...i like the last two lines the best...many times we open ourselves up, only to be rejected, which leads to a break in ourselves...i love this piece..great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Silent Jan 11, 2004 16:35:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Jan 11, 2004 16:35:06 GMT -5 I also enjoyed this, probably because there seems like theres such a simple, but strong meaning behind it, but almost everyone feels that way at least once in their lifetime.
	Amber

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Silent Jan 15, 2004 18:40:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 15, 2004 18:40:56 GMT -5 I feel that way right now. Great write.
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shadowling Novice Posts: 19	Silent Jan 17, 2004 13:00:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shadowling on Jan 17, 2004 13:00:29 GMT -5 very nicely done i've felt the this way before very nice write great job.

Sathien Guest	Silent Jan 24, 2004 15:02:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 15:02:00 GMT -5 that makes me feel guilty. but i'm not sure if i should be. anyway, very touchy write. loved it. keep up!

Persephone Guest	Silent Jan 24, 2004 23:07:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Persephone on Jan 24, 2004 23:07:35 GMT -5 Thanks for the comments.

Eclipse Apprentice It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time. Posts: 222	Silent Jan 29, 2004 18:44:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eclipse on Jan 29, 2004 18:44:53 GMT -5 aww capturing the feelings of a crush. i really liked this one.
	You saw what you get If you take what you take. Look in the eyes of the test. It's all because... Now there's a feeling I get. When I look to the left. But we can never be sensed. Our searching for a sign.

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Silent Feb 3, 2004 8:40:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:40:11 GMT -5 I thought this was a fine piece of writing. regards richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Silent Feb 12, 2004 1:04:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:04:19 GMT -5 good job! i read it over three times it was so good!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Persephone Guest	Silent Feb 13, 2004 4:47:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Persephone on Feb 13, 2004 4:47:07 GMT -5 Thank you for the replies.

Post by Persephone on Dec 5, 2003 22:41:00 GMT -5

Post by Skye on Dec 7, 2003 12:51:58 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Dec 11, 2003 11:34:10 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Jan 11, 2004 16:35:06 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 15, 2004 18:40:56 GMT -5

Post by shadowling on Jan 17, 2004 13:00:29 GMT -5

Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 15:02:00 GMT -5

Post by Persephone on Jan 24, 2004 23:07:35 GMT -5

Post by Eclipse on Jan 29, 2004 18:44:53 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 3, 2004 8:40:11 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:04:19 GMT -5

Post by Persephone on Feb 13, 2004 4:47:07 GMT -5