Skye
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Post by Skye on Dec 2, 2003 21:54:29 GMT -5
I think about you day in and out,
I think this could be it,
I think I may be in love,
It frightens me so,
To think of how much I care,
I've never felt this before,
It's a wonderful feeling,
Though I don't know if you feel the same,
So now I wonder,
If it's true,
If this love is meant to be...
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Post by John Barnett on Dec 3, 2003 16:47:03 GMT -5
Great write, easy to understand, and identify with....congratulations on posting the 1st poem on the new Poet Club!
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Dec 3, 2003 19:52:37 GMT -5
Thanks, OoO I didn't look @ that! hehe I'm actully first at something! wooooohooooo  (That made my day) ~Skye |
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Post by Persephone on Dec 5, 2003 22:39:33 GMT -5
very hopeful. =)
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Dec 6, 2003 14:08:13 GMT -5
Thanks:)~Skye
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Post by bloodredtears on Dec 11, 2003 11:38:35 GMT -5
very good piece...i do like the youthful innocence in this piece...definitely the first thoughts that go through your mind when you discover someone you're serious about for the first time...good job skye!
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Dec 13, 2003 0:43:10 GMT -5
Thanks so much:)~Skye
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Post by SilverEyes on Jan 15, 2004 19:00:15 GMT -5
I love it, it's very sweet and heartfelt.
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Post by Skye on Jan 15, 2004 19:38:25 GMT -5
Thanks! ~Skye |
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Post by shadowling on Jan 17, 2004 12:44:19 GMT -5
very true and so common to anyone in love. nice job with this poem i really like it.
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Skye
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Post by Skye on Jan 17, 2004 20:10:43 GMT -5
Thanks shadowling!~Skye
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(That made my day)