CURE FOR WRITERS BLOCK

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

ok so, here's how it is:

10 words posted by the previous writer, you make a poem using the 10 words, then post 10 more words which the next person will use in their poem, etc.

eg:
fruit
love
towel
wipe
dense
breeze
remote
red
held
read

i held the letter in my hand
i wipe the sweat from my brow
as i read the letter
a hot breezerushed in
the air so dense i couldn't breathe

i think back to yesterday
in a paradise remote
location unknown
the sky had burned red
we sat together
on a towel shared
feeding each other fruit
we had picked earlier
from this Eden
i could bear to look at him
as i told him
i don't love you
anymore

ok so that was pretty crap. here's the next 10:

wound
bred (not bread)
virginal
top
churns
even
foliage
salad
lid
basket

GOOD LUCK!

[T.J. Barber]

This is a great idea Rinna...I promise that when I can find a better time I will reply to this..Awesome idea...

Tj

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

salad for lunch, life is honey
virginal notions wander aimlessly
as i imagine a life void of sin
the wicker basket mocks idealism
held steadfast

stomach churns, the seas of emotion
were never steady, even when i felt on top
i finger old wounds watching foliage get buffeted
struggling to keep a lid on my desire
deluded vision bred from hurt.


chasm
surreal
chaste
vanity
flurry
hibernation
envy
check
branded
fall

[bloodredtears]

Unbound by your vanity
a raging hormone of insanity
The chasm of your depravity
seeks to destroy us all

I envy you your hibernation
from the world and all it entails
only you can run and not fall
and yet, you falter

I will not be branded by you
in a world as surreal as this
it no longer works to keep tally
your fury will not keep me in check

And though your flight, your flurry
is enough to cause me to disemble
I remain chaste in the midst
of your unbound vanity


okie I'm a bit out of practice...aha
but...10 words

secrecy
offense
unmask
hypocrisy
taciturn
truth
sensation
scream
soothe
brand