i hate my job. i think it hates me too

[pig]

i am the new man machine.
human, but perfectly clean.
new hands to take your all
and bite - chew - spit
until there is no more.
eyes are eyeless
face is sore
bite - chew - spit to the cold
cold floor

see him?
hes the machine company,
he got the looks, got the lot
and will take yours from you
for free, then in spite of sin
take your whole family.
eyes are wiseless
a face to deplore
he'll bite - chew - spit you out
onto the cold
cold floor

see her?
right there- her name is Money.
an envious stare fixed on
all who see,
shes worth more than life
infact death is more her scene.
she holds a loveless affair with
the whole company
her lies are tireless,
no face like before,
its her that will make them
spit you out
down to the cold, cold floor.



no title yet, any thoughts? *working title now "i hate my job. i think it hates me too" still open to suggestions tho*. would go in mad at the world i think.... any ways, any good? not to sure about the wording of the ending, last couple of lines. bit plain?

[bloodredtears]

i really liked this piece...and, no, i don't think it is too plain...as for title ideas...maybe "Silicon Valley" or something along those line or "Monopoly" i don't know...something to do with companies and greed...and yes it could fit well in Mad at the World! good job...
oh one typo 6th line last stanza infact is two words in fact great job!

[T.J. Barber]

Hey, I liked it just the way it is...I don't think it needs another name. I hate my job to but hey, it brings home the bacon. I'm not sure but I don't think anyone here knows what it's like to strap on a bullet proof vet and gun everyday with intent to protect someone with your life that you don't even know nor really care about. It's awful..but, it is my calling and it is my curse...why fight it?

Anyway, Tj

[beginswithKendsinG]

Hey TJ, I'm in the military, been there doen that got the T-shirt. lol