A Devil of a Poem or Just a numbers game

[hp]

Daylight fades darkness engulfs the night
Dark angel's pungent toxic fumes incite
Lulling victims into an apocalyptic slumber
666 the beast's sign, nefarious number
Master of depravity pulling the strings
Twisting of minds shattering of dreams

Incestuous love affair continued with death
Fires of torment upon mankind's breath
Winds howl for Satan's darkness hour
Eluded by none, deaths lethal power
Warm blood tantalises, heightens the senses
Hunger strikes, eliminate all mortals defences

Another soul for Satan's blasphemous keep
Listen closely how these mortals weep
Thieves, Whores, humans riddled with sin
Tormented, twisted, let the carnage begin
Winged carrier clawing you're under attack
Wrenching life's essence, turning it black

Deepest darkest abyss Satan's deadly kiss
Praying death comes swiftly, eternal bliss
Salted wounds brings screams of pain
Harbingers of death no more restrain
Grinding souls with the gritted wheel
Eyes glazed in anguish you squeal

Satan's demons strip to the bone
Cold and submissive you stand-alone
Summoning your soul just before dawn
Gates of hell your soul's withdrawn
Beckoning kindred spirits into the fire
Their raptured bones for his empire

Burning fires of hell, swallowed whole
Winged Incubus ripped into your soul
Beelzebub's nails clawing ever deep within
Frayed ends of sanity incessantly thin
Destined to languish in eternal blight
Hell fire and damnation yours tonight

© Hp

[T.J. Barber]

WOW! I think that we should let Kemleth be the judge of this one....he could more than likely come up with the perfect solution to your name crisis...This form of poetry is his speciality...

TJ

[beginswithKendsinG]

lol my specialty huh?

Well, If I knew you better this would be easy.

I would name it:

The Truth
If this is about how I feel when concerning this issue then I think this fits.

The Lie
If this is sort of mockery towards most common schools of thought, then this title fits.

It is easy to write poetry if you have talent. It is difficult to give titles because you have to think about how you feel towards what your piece is saying. I actualy Title my poems first, (something simple like Hate, Grief, Solace, etc.) and try to write in accordance with the title. Of course this doesn't always work. Then you just rename it to what you view you wnat out of this piece, what you feel about it, or what others have named simialar pieces. I usualy name these things the way I showed because I write with an agenda. I have things I want to say and point out, and this is the way to have my stage. (or soapbox)

Anyway I hope that helps "you" decide what "you" think "your" piece should be named.

[hp]

K and G. The reason I’m having so much trouble with the title is because the poem its self was written as a result of a friend saying I bet you can’t write a poem about the devil. In the end the poem ended up with 6 verses and each verse had 6 lines and each line 6 words. Which brings me back to: Just a numbers game or a devil of a poem, so you see my dilemma.

[beginswithKendsinG]

Name it 666