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BlackRainbow
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Der Engel Schw?rzung

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Who I am Apr 19, 2004 12:52:23 GMT -5

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Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 19, 2004 12:52:23 GMT -5

Who am I?
I am the sun
That warms your face
Im why you run
I enhance your grace

I wipe your tears
When I make you cry
I invent your fears
When I walk by

Although i know you
You haven't seen me
I watch you...taste you..
You will learn to love me

Last Edit: Apr 19, 2004 12:53:16 GMT -5 by BlackRainbow

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Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Who I am Apr 19, 2004 13:34:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Apr 19, 2004 13:34:23 GMT -5 I like it! It's like saying I'm the sh*t and thats it. Ha ha, love confidence. You are a good poet.
	Last Edit: May 1, 2004 13:16:21 GMT -5 by Mikepoet

X x K e l Z x X Chapter Leader Just Me Posts: 1,035	Who I am Apr 19, 2004 15:21:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 19, 2004 15:21:38 GMT -5 I agree with Mike, I like the confidence behind this piece, very good, and welcome to Poet Club.
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John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Who I am Apr 19, 2004 18:56:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 18:56:31 GMT -5 I too feel that this poem was different from most of what we read in this board, very good, I liked it as well. Welcome to Poet Club BlackRainbow, it's good to have you around.
	Jwalaeb

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Who I am Apr 19, 2004 23:43:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 23:43:42 GMT -5 i'd also like to put in my 10 cents by agreeing with everyone haha...but seriously this was a wonderful poem and i, too, am glad to have you here!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Who I am May 10, 2004 3:24:35 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 10, 2004 3:24:35 GMT -5 welcome! great intro poem, don't mind the avatar as well, it's alright! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 19, 2004 12:52:23 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Apr 19, 2004 13:34:23 GMT -5

Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 19, 2004 15:21:38 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 18:56:31 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 23:43:42 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 10, 2004 3:24:35 GMT -5