~Final Manifesto~

[DarkVortex]

To the light in my lurid ascent bring me thy hope.
For all the times where my help could not cope.
Longing to be thee one atop a hill of a fought battle.
The war that end's fear but still remains as dead cattle.

I sacrificed a selfless due to the one I thought I knew.
All denying my help turning my soul to it's darkest blue.
It maroons a pain within a hand of trust and lost cause.
Be that it must for my patronage goes without aplause.

Try shall be the word where many question it's meaning.
Pleaing for another chance of my alive well-being.
One day few will witness the battle I strongly stood for.
When hence forth a rose upon my rosewood coffin door.

Tis now I bargain for my life when I merely ask of trust.
Denied all of the above for you only do as you must.
Tell as it stands tonight my longed fate is finally calling.
I'll die with a head high to not witness hell while falling.

[Seth]

"Try shall be the word where many question it's meaning.
Pleaing for another chance of my alive well-being.
One day few will witness the battle I strongly stood for.
When hence forth a rose upon my rosewood coffin door."




Wow. I think you've found yourself a worshipper. Phenomenal piece. It's breathtaking and deeply consuming. Very powerful and perfectly delivered. Love the last line here. When I saw it in your sig. I thought it was a funny and cool statement. Stellar write, I'm just enthralled.

I'll die with a head high to not witness hell while falling.

[T.J. Barber]

Awesome write Vortex. I loved the lure and intensity. It just sucked me in and engulfed me with it's brilliant wording and imagery. Keep it up!! By the way, Welcome to Poet Club..Enjoy your stay...

TJ