water in my lungs

[alostandbrokensoul]

You say you love me
but ive seen your face
When you’re around me
it shows disgrace.

I’ve smelled her perfume
the lipstick on your shirt
you don’t think I notice
that your nothing but a flirt.

you say you need me
the lies stick to your tongue.
you don’t realize
your like water in my lungs.

Ive heard your conversations
the tone in your voice
pick one or the other
it’s simply your choice.

you wasted too much time
you’ve played me like a game
I thought you were different
but all you are is lame.

You’ll be my end
so we’re through
so screw my heart
because I hate you.

not one of my best and some errors couldnt fix it im at school

[T.J. Barber]

WOW!!!!!

This is truly not a poem that I would like directed at me.
I hate knowing I have hurt a woman. I especially hate knowing that I scorned someone who I love or once loved. This is a great poem.....keep it up!!

TJ

[X x K e l Z x X]

This is deep, but very good for that reason.

Kelz

[T.J. Barber]

It certainly is isn't it...it's nice to know we still have such talent floating around in here huh??

[Seth]

you say you need me
the lies stick to your tongue.
you don’t realize
your like water in my lungs.

This is a wonderful write, love the emotion and flow. Also, holds such a common and knowing experience written out, quite clear and nicely...