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Iris
Apr 5, 2005 3:17:25 GMT -5
Post by pencinks on Apr 5, 2005 3:17:25 GMT -5
Iris, and I've seen you again staring like a joke to my silence and the smile that melts me... slowly, and man am I scalded again? hot chocolate that warms my heart.
I am now being sucked in a limbo of slumber... Iris, and my foolish excuses for goodbyes are now becoming hellos, again and I'm worried, thinking it will only slip away so fast
I'd be humming melodies of regret for not uttering a word, thunderous throbs that deafens me...
that awakens my snore of a beautiful dream ... Iris, why am I dumbfounded and speechless by your sight that disarms me... the strength and resolve slowly wastes away and now I can only grin...dreaming
that there'd be sunset beyond the horizon... ending for another day...hoping foolishly.
which may take me back to the reality...
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Iris
Apr 8, 2005 12:29:30 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 8, 2005 12:29:30 GMT -5
Very interesting post. I truly enjoyed the flow of this one. By the way, welcome to Poet Club.
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
Posts: 411
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Iris
Apr 19, 2005 14:39:51 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Apr 19, 2005 14:39:51 GMT -5
Indeed, welcome aboard. Intriguing piece; has a very captivating appeal. Wonderful sway of words and flow. Breathtaking write.
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Iris
Apr 21, 2005 8:16:15 GMT -5
Post by QueenofDarkness on Apr 21, 2005 8:16:15 GMT -5
very nice. I enjoyed well i'll agree with what Tj said.
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