Drop

[calamityroo]

Like a drop of water
Falling from a facuet
I see your face fading
Away from my hand
A tear escapes my eye
Following your downward
Path to the endless dark
The endless pain
That follows so closely
Behind the absence of you
Leaving my arms

Like a drop of water
Falling from a faucet
I see your blood
Dripping down your
Face, cascading down
Like a never ending river...
A river of red water
That once flowed through
Your ever lovely body
I watch the blood
Escape that cut I made

Like a drop of water
Falling from a faucet
I see your body
Dangling over the edge
Just alittle tap and
You could fall
Into the never ending
Darkness that scares you so
You know the pain that
Will follow you would be
Endless like the dark

Like a drop of water
Falling from the faucet
I see you falling
Into the darkness
That I love so much
I will welcome the pain
That will follow so closely
To the death of you
Slowly suffering
Dying in pain

Like a drop of water
You fall and hit the bottom...

[X x K e l Z x X]

Again, I must say, you write with such great imagery, keep it up!

[calamityroo]

Thank you... I appericate the comment. ;D

[Seth]

Stellar write, the imagery is breathtaking
and awesome. Terrific ending, the
flow really pulls you in and doesn't
let go.

[calamityroo]

Thank you. I really wanted to draw people into this piece. ;D

[Clairvoyantmind]

[glow=red,2,300]good job i lkike they way u ended it[/glow]