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Post by John Barnett on Jan 10, 2005 0:13:23 GMT -5
I am haunted daily by your face memories that I can't seem to erase Evade my mind and engulf my soul Feel like I'm falling through a bottomless hole Pain buries me in myself Rain covers me in my cell I'm a prisoner to love and a slave to you If only you could say you love me too Set me free, I'm dying in this world All because you're the only girl That makes my heart pound fast And my happiness last And you took it all away On the sad, sad day That you walked out my door Slammed it on me, said "We're no more" My heart shattered into And you left me so cruel Crying and screaming Moaning and weeping Praying for God to save me from you But my love is eternal, a joke so cruel
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jan 11, 2005 20:20:54 GMT -5
These are the words of a broken spirit and cracked heart, very deep and very honest...this is amazing John, it's really great to be reading your work again. I've missed it....glad to see the talent is still there.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Jan 13, 2005 19:21:18 GMT -5
This is great John, I really like this one...very deep
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 23, 2005 6:21:37 GMT -5
oh dear, what a heart-wrenching write. wonderful, john.
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Post by John Barnett on Feb 7, 2005 20:59:20 GMT -5
Too bad it's true
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