it feels like

cherryXchapstick
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it feels like Dec 20, 2004 12:37:24 GMT -5

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Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 20, 2004 12:37:24 GMT -5

is this what it feels like to be broken
left open
and dying
is this what it feels like to know
pain shows
cant trust
is this what it feels like to cry
eyes dry
beatuty kills
is this what it feels like to be in mourning
no warning
your fault
this IS what it feels like to love
none above
just pain

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	it feels like Dec 25, 2004 20:33:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Dec 25, 2004 20:33:51 GMT -5 Very good, I like the format, great work.
	Jwalaeb

cherryXchapstick Novice Posts: 26	it feels like Dec 28, 2004 21:36:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 28, 2004 21:36:04 GMT -5 thanks very much for the reply. '')

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	it feels like Dec 30, 2004 23:38:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Dec 30, 2004 23:38:39 GMT -5 Hm, this is really cool. The format rocks, as does the manner of wording and flow. Wonderfully done!
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

alostandbrokensoul Guest	it feels like Jan 5, 2005 12:59:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jan 5, 2005 12:59:54 GMT -5 this is really good i like the way it flows and the way you wrote it!!!

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	it feels like Jan 23, 2005 6:15:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 23, 2005 6:15:57 GMT -5 raw pain is all-encompassing, and the consequent battle of head and heart only adds to the hurt. thanks for sharing.
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 20, 2004 12:37:24 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Dec 25, 2004 20:33:51 GMT -5

Post by cherryXchapstick on Dec 28, 2004 21:36:04 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Dec 30, 2004 23:38:39 GMT -5

Post by alostandbrokensoul on Jan 5, 2005 12:59:54 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jan 23, 2005 6:15:57 GMT -5