Unglued

[X x K e l Z x X]

Let me be the first to say
That you are so confused
You feel you need to walk away
And I am feeling used
You push me out
Face first on the ground
Leave without a doubt
That your decision is sound
And I'm left with my wounds
Left in my gloom
Crying myself to sleep
Trying so hard not to weep
And you're gone
So far away, so now I write my songs
The heart I left behind with you
Has left me forever unglued

[cherryXchapstick]

very nice. i like this.

[John Barnett]

Great write Kelly, it's always nice to read new material from you, I enjoyed this a lot, it seemed very songish too.

[::..::FoX::..::]

Kelly, this is very, very good. I also like your new picture, still looking great as well.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

this sang to me, kelly. loved it.

[T.J. Barber]

Always a day late and a dollar short. Sorry I didn't see this sooner love. Great write by the way and I have to agree with everyone when I say that this post really seemed to sing with emotion. Excellent job!!

TJ

[Seth]

Sorry I'm so late... Fantastic piece, I hafta be the broken record once more... this has such a songish feel to it, and the flow and message is something both real and easily felt. Beautifully written, portraying that same old depressing side of love whilst carried out so nicely.
Wonderfully done.

[pipes]

a little short but i kinda liked that, and i agree with everyone, very sing-song rhythm.


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