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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 4, 2004 21:35:17 GMT -5
For just a few hours On only one day I was with you And you were with me
I remember that moment That one sparkling moment When you kissed me With your satin lips
I remember the joy And all the happiness That you gave me With my very first kiss
I remember that night That wonderous night When we kissed When we touched
I remember you leaving And saying these words I can't be yours So please, just find another
How I've tried To find another love But my thoughts Always return to you
I've felt nothing but pain Nothing but sadness And an indescripable loneliness All sealed with the mark of your kiss
I know I should be angry I know there should be hate But all there is Is love in my heart
4:00 AM January 25, 2004
He comes across as a horrible person in this but it's really not his fault.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 1:04:09 GMT -5
that's a great piece...i know how it is too be longing for something...i have a guy that i wish i was with! great job Silver Eyes!
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Chaotic_Thetis
Apprentice
Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it.
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Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 7, 2004 12:13:17 GMT -5
Indeed, wonderful job, a longing heart in a certain way can be expressed quite beautifully.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 7, 2004 20:03:13 GMT -5
great write, i am in this position right now actually...but besides the fact, great job!
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Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:29:06 GMT -5
This is lovely. It is about longing for another, but, it did not work out. It is simply beautiful. Tania
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:28:11 GMT -5
nice job! you're a really talented writer. i especially love
"I know I should be angry I know there should be hate But all there is Is love in my heart"
i relate to that so much right now. good job!
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