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Post by AnSidhe on Apr 6, 2005 23:26:12 GMT -5
This is one I wrote just a few days ago.
THIS COMA Slip into this coma where I lie I’m waiting for you always So come with me into the shadows In the recesses of our minds It’s dark and dank and dreary All at the same time My thoughts and memories haunt me Make them go, chase them away Come to where I reside The shadows are dark and long Cold stretches on forever My need for you is overwhelming Chase away my nightmares Save me from myself You can’t bring me back But you can join me Love me here It’s oh so lonely here I’m cold and sweaty with fear Unidentified movement surrounds me I need light to chase these terrors away You are my light So come to me Be by my side We can face the darkness together Help me defeat the demons Cure this longing for life Join me Love me Take me in your arms Tell me it’s all right That it will be okay This isn’t just a dream It’s cold reality Be here with me, my love Join me in the afterlife Slip into the coma where I lie
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Post by Seth on Apr 19, 2005 15:07:25 GMT -5
Hm. Wonderfully written, love the yearning emotion and dark deep imagery that lurks upon each line. Very cool and consuming, just loved it.
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