Banished

[alostandbrokensoul]

Banished from a world I hated
Stuck in a life far outdated
full of pain, yet loving it all
searching for blame only to fall.

Echos of screaming, mine and unknown
something unseeming, out of proportion its blown
desolince and darkness, a friend with out light
bodies, a carcuss, to survive i must fight.

Blood and sweat, all mixed to one
forced in a war that just begun
the smell of death cast in the air
just two left the only ones there.

Now in a battle between you and I
treated like cattle now you must die
a scream and a yell, pain in the air
a dream that fell, no one to care.

All is dark, the sky now black
hit the mark, a life one will lack
blood surrounds up, seeps into the floor
I guess you win, cause im not breathing anymore.

[T.J. Barber]

WOW!!!

I loved this one! I mean, it had heart, pain, and excitement. I must say that it really kept me going until the end. I almost wanted it to go on...Great write!

Tj

[AnSidhe]

Very good; I enjoyed it, especially the last part.