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Post by luscious on Jan 24, 2005 10:36:04 GMT -5
Midnight Fear
Wailing force, roaring sound
Wind gushing, swirling round.
Storm of Power, noise of might
Surrounds the black of dark midnight.
Shadows cease, the eyes are blind
Shades blend and fool the mind.
Fear leaps to snatch at breath,
For surely near is unknown death
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Post by QueenofDarkness on Feb 3, 2005 15:04:04 GMT -5
Midnight Fear Fear leaps to snatch at breath, For surely near is unknown death This imagiry hit close to home for me. Very nice |
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 17, 2005 22:09:51 GMT -5
Yeah, this is a great poem
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Post by †.(V)ôô|\|£Î†ƒåcë.† on Feb 25, 2005 13:31:24 GMT -5
I really liked this. It kinda sounded like a spell at the beggining. Don't mind meh spelling by the way XD. ILoved the last stanza, Very nice ;-)
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Mar 14, 2005 16:09:32 GMT -5
beautiful in a sorta hypnotic kinda way i love it!!
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Post by AnSidhe on Apr 6, 2005 23:14:15 GMT -5
Very good. Short and yet you got across to the readers. I really liked it.
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